Emma, You have made a good start to these sheets but they lack depth of comment. What you have said is fairly obvious so far and you really need to analyse each bottle design, commenting on what you see i.e. materials, shape, colour, edges, lid design, finish, safety etc etc. You can do this you just need to put in a bit of time! Your sheet that you have added your own photos needs far more analysis!
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Emma, You have made a good start to these sheets but they lack depth of comment. What you have said is fairly obvious so far and you really need to analyse each bottle design, commenting on what you see i.e. materials, shape, colour, edges, lid design, finish, safety etc etc. You can do this you just need to put in a bit of time! Your sheet that you have added your own photos needs far more analysis!
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